Anyone ready for Part II of Tyr's story?

Sep 11, 2010 20:16

I've been fiddling with this long enough. proudcockatrice suggested just throwing it up (my words, not his) on the LJ and doing more fixing later.

You do not have to have read the first part, as this starts in a very different place. Our Tyr is a grownup psychiatrist in his early 30s now, on a new planet and with new friends...

A Life in Love, Part II, Chapter 1: Across a Crowded Room )

+a life in love

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laurabryannan September 12 2010, 04:26:13 UTC
Yay, I'm happy to learn Tyr's landed with a group of wonderful colleagues. That was a fun exchange to witness, and I'm very curious about David. He just might get me over missing Tim. ^_^

Oh, but the formatting got flummoxed somewhere along the way thar.

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ekaterin24 September 12 2010, 16:26:23 UTC
I'm so glad you like David!

And I'll fix the formatting soon, and then create a Part II master post.

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proudcockatrice September 12 2010, 05:48:55 UTC
This is me not fucking up the html in my comment, this time...

"inpatient and research psychiatrist"

That doesn't say what you think it says. You mean to say he's the psychiatrist for residents, yes? You said he's a psychiatrist AND an inpatient. *snrk*

David grinned. Seemed he was going to fit in well with this lot.

And that's where your html is busted. *grins*

Harald,”

Close the italics inside the comma.

“Oh, is that what you really want?” Tyr delivered with wide-eyed innocence.

*iz ded* BAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god, can I weasel you into a crossover? I want to get this guy in a room with Sin.

Yeah, okay, so I'm hooked. I'm so watching for more of this. *grins*

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ekaterin24 September 12 2010, 16:25:36 UTC
Thanks for catching the HTML messes and posting where they appear! ::is about to hug you but offers a pastry in thanks instead::

And I'll use some hyphens to fix the inpatient thing. Though David would say he feels like an inpatient some days.

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proudcockatrice September 12 2010, 17:06:58 UTC
Gah. I just went to rec this fic to someone, but I forgot it was a locked entry. :(

Also, YAY PASTRY! *nom*

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ekaterin24 September 12 2010, 18:58:08 UTC
Master post, with most of the corrections, is unlocked:

http://ekaterin24.livejournal.com/220944.html

Again, thanks for your help!

And yes, Sin and Tyr can certainly meet sometime! Care to select a time and place?

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