fic: Fear Of... (Part 2)

[eitoph]

Comments

[fourth_rose]

Wow. You gave me a lot to think about with this story, and although it's probably not the effect you were going for, it feels to me like you were weaving together two AUs to show us different aspects coming together like the pieces of a mosaic that are nothing but colorful shards from up close, but show a picture when you look at them from a distance. Therefore, it doesn't really matter to me whether your interpretation of various moments in the show is the same as mine - what matters is that you created a really fascinating picture with this story, and that you brought out facets I had never noticed or even considered before. (I swear, that totally made sense in my head.)

I'm very much looking forward to reading what you have in store for us on Sunday! :))

[eitoph]

This was such a lovely, considered comment, so thank you so much and I'm really glad you enjoyed. Even if your take on things is different, to know that it makes you think, and that you found it interesting is just the best thing to hear!

[housemdwriter]

Wow. That was absolutely extraordinary. I am in love with the scene of the night after Vincent's death. This is truly, unspeakably, beautiful.

[eitoph]

Thank you! I wavered over that scene because it seems to have been done so often, so your comment really made me feel better. So glad you liked :)

[meg_pat2000]

this was absolutely and utterly amazing! I love the way you have interwoven the two stories- the one every one wanted and was so disappointed that we didnt get and then you show WHy we didnt get it! ZAnd then...wow words are failing me right now..

BRILLIANT!

[eitoph]

This was such a lovely comment to receive - thank you! I'm glad it all came together and worked for you this way, it was important both stories worked together, so I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed.

[limone1]

Love how you take the road not traveled too and make two different routes work with canon and the characters.

And you write it beautifully.

[makd]

ITA. fascinating "what ifs" and beautifully written.

[eitoph]

Glad you found this interesting! It is a kind of elaborate premise so it's great to hear that you still liked that "what if" take on it all! :)

[eitoph]

Thank you! I'm sorry I've been so slow to respond but I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed :)

[taikowinds]

Wow I really like how you wove together the two story lines, captivating and interesting. It really does make you wonder what would have happened if Brennan had said yes and if they would be where they are today. Thank you for such a lovely story.