Accusations of Being A Nomad

[eiremauve]

Title: Accusations of Being A Nomad
Author: eiremauve
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 66
Prompt: 
A/N: If I had spent more time on this, maybe it would be better! And more complex. >_< Next time, I swear I won't wait until the last minute.

Comments

[keppiehed]

I can see a few minor errors in punctuation that I am sure are a result of being so rushed (we've all been there!), yet this is a good concept that fits with the prompt! Don't beat yourself up in your author's notes so much! I am just glad to see you writing. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.

[eiremauve]

Yeah, there are some errors. Ah, well. You're welcome! :) Thank you!

[sandwindsky]

Hey, it was a really tough prompt this week. This was an interesting poem, which despite being short was evocative of the nomadic sense.

[eiremauve]

Thank you very much! Glad you thought it fit!

[osoreranai]

This totally reminds me of my Native American lit class. I think it hit the prompt square on the head.

[eiremauve]

Thank you very much! Oh, a Native American lit class, that sounds fun.

[alphien]

I really enjoyed your use of enjambment, and the narrator's tone was very strong. Excellent!

Good luck in the polls!

[eiremauve]

Thank you very much! :)

[belluminabyssus]

I really enjoyed the concept of this -- it was short but sweet. I wasn't entirely sure about the title; it was a little awkwardly worded, and I would have preferred it to be more elegantly phrased to reflect the elegance of the poem itself. Good luck in the polls!

[eiremauve]

Thank you very much! I wasn't sure about the title, but it fit, so...