Family Reunion part V (at long friggin last orz)

[eiliem]

Title: Family Reunion: Harmony
Characters: Ace, Luffy & their crews
Rating: G
Pairings: Luffy/chopsticks, Chopper/sweets

Follows: Interlude
Which came after Heart to Heart

Many thanks to naye for chasing the Negative Hollows away when they wanted to eat me. *shakes fist*

Comments

[catiprojectc]

This is absolute epic love. And that's when I say it short. But I really loved it. I love the entire serie of this one.
this is like totaly epic.. awsomness that makes my heart flutter and leaves me with a really good feeling for the rest of the day.

I really like your style of writing, it just drags you along not letting you go untill the very end. And I for one can really appreciate that

Epic win on the interaction between Luffy and Whitebeard.
But the interaction with whtiebeard and ace made me fluttery and squeal.

Also Ace and Marco. XD disfunctional brothers. but they are awsome. Yes they are. There are many parts that I like.

Go sleep off the shock of you captain telling you that your little brother reminds him of you're the one person in the world you want nothing to do with; watch your crewmates make asses of themselves. Sleep it off, watch, sleep, watch-

that though. XD yess. Damn awsome.
But to be honset. I'm just in love with the entire fic.
Thank you for sharing

[eiliem]

\o/ ^__________^ That makes me so happy to hear!

It gets hard sometimes, after staring a a piece of writing too long, knowing if I'm writing in-character, if it makes sense - and then I get all this wonderful feedback and it makes me all warm and fluttery for the rest of the week!

Luffy and Whitebeard. Seriously. Want more interaction please!

...And Whitebeard and Ace. Them too. They are so sweet! And and family! And Ace and Marco.

ODA! Warm family fuzzies! *puppy eyes at him*

Thank you for commenting &hearts

[catiprojectc]

Yes. I second that. More warm family fuzzies cause they make me all squishy inside.!

and your welcome. The postive feedback was well worth on this. :)

[elisha2kings]

Yay! You did decide to continue your Reunion series!

This is awesome by the way! Finally Whitebeard comments how much Luffy resembles Roger and Ace is not pleased by the comment at all! No sir! but he meant well!

Oh my God, I did not realize that Ace wouldn't have known that Shanks was part of Roger's nakama. Come to think of it, Luffy himself didn't know until Rayleigh told him. Very nice catch!

And we need moar Ace/Straw Hats interaction!! The last part with Usopp was so nice, although I expected Yassop to come up because it would be nice if Ace saw that not everyone takes having their pirate father abandon them personally!

Yes, family heals everything. Family you adopt, family that adopts you, and the family that your family adopts!!

Luffy-Whitebeard interaction was the best part really. I really, really hope that it turns out this way in OP because Whitebeard can't die!! ;_; Here's to hoping that it'll turn out as fluffily as you write it! Doubt it, though. This is Oda we're talking about, the Emperor of

[eiliem]

I did :) I... honestly, I had the general events for this series planned out since this summer! Since around chapter 551 o__o ...some of it before then

I just hugely underestimated how long it would take me XP

I want more Ace/Strawhat interaction too! Oda! We can haz?

\o/ I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THE LUFFY-WHITEBEARD!!! The reason for this fic, I kid you not XP (and then it dragged on and on... orz :P)