[fic] LEVEL E [part 5]

[eijichu]

Author: Eiji Satoshi
Pairing: ONKEY
Genre: AU Yaoi
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: SHINee is not mine or yours LOL
Warning: un-beta-ed engrish
A/N: please give me only positive comment XD

Previous Parts:
- prologue
- part 1
- part 2
- part 3
- part 4

Comments

[rinni1905]

I'm so sorry that I don't comment in those previous parts. I checked only Onkey community but not Replay so I missed out a lot of parts.

The smut is so hot and I can feel the air around me is so much hotter, you make it hard for me in the summer, but I really love this.

I wonder how Onkey relationship go now. Will Kibum quit his job just for Jinki? And I have the feeling that Onkey have fallen for each other hard. I love smut but also fluff things, I hope the next chap will be great as well. Love this. And update soon.

[eijichu]

it's okay dear ^^
sorry for making you sweating in the summer lol
thanks so much <333
i will update it soon~~~

[2pmconspiracy]

Spot :D be back later(:

[eijichu]

waiting for ur comment patiently kekeke

[2pmconspiracy]

rofl, babe you're always replying to my comments so quickly! are you online 24/7 or something! rofl xD

anyways, yay finally i see epic onkey action ♥ and im simply LOVING ever single bit of it! hahahahaa i just LOL-ed so hard at the last line though xD KIBUM'S A PERVERT~! hahaha he's a cute pervert xD

and can't wait for the next part, like usual! hope you update soon! :DDD

[eijichu]

kekekeke <333
honestly, i live with internet so i'm OL almost 24/7 XD
thanks so much for reading, dear~ *hug*
i'll update it soon~ kekeke

[crazyoverbishie]

wwhoooaaa...they must be really busy...another round after another round...seems like they're going to have the 3rd round...XXDDD

whoofff...that was pretty intense...my face got all red just by reading it....i think its my fault that i brain always creating image of whatever i read...>.<

nice chapter^^

pls do write more...ill be waiting for another great chapters...^^

[eijichu]

kekekekekekekeekekek <333
yeah, i'm planning to make 3rd, 4th, 5th or nonstop round LOLOLOLOL
thanks so much, bb~
i will update it soon <333

[crazyoverbishie]

hahahaha..really???

if its you..i think its possible...XXDD....Onew is getting stupid coz he cant think anythng but Key...yeah but i dont blame him...its KEY...XXDDD

ill be waiting...^^

[choiahra]

sorry i didnt comment on previous part bcs i made this acc yesterday just for viewing ur ff! OMG YES ONKEY FTW. reminds me their lovey-dovey time in the last part of Hello Baby special ep!

YES. ONEW IS A HOTTIE AND KEY ACTS LIKE A %$&%&$&%#*&^ !! YES IT'S SO HOT. IM YOUR FAN BB. <3 YOU SO MUCH. :))

[eijichu]

oh i'm so touched~ ;_; u've made LJ acc just to read my fic
thanks so much <3333333 *hug*

[choiahra]

*hug back*

LOVE YOU, waiting for the next chap! *kissandhug* <3

LEVEL E [part 5]

[reinyuu]

aaa..
What happened in the prev. Chapter,
i miss the 4th chapter T^T..
I can't read it again bcoz it's locked..

Finally jinki had his first experience >///<
eventhough i don't know why it can happened, the scene was damn hot.. :D

update soon^^..
I hope i didn't miss it again

Re: LEVEL E [part 5]

[eijichu]

i've added you as friend, so u can read previous chapter ^^;;;
sorry for this convenience, i have to lock this fic >_<
thanks so much for reading ^^
i will update it soon :)