Comments | eightbitguy: Clarity (this is very raw)

eightbitguy

Clarity (this is very raw)

May 11, 2009 23:14

Clarity.

I set the needle down and start listening for the third time in two days, but also the third time in almost a decade.

"Table For Glasses"

Bells, that was the first thing that struck me. Bells in a rock album? From the start, this is something more beautiful, and from the start it reminded me of you. “It happened to fast to make sense ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

handstil May 12 2009, 15:23:07 UTC

I have been embarrassed to admit how much this album means to me. I listened to it so much when I was pregnant with Owen, and not since. Now I must find it on the internets for downloading.

eightbitguy May 12 2009, 20:46:42 UTC

Let me know if you can't find it, I can send you a zip.

waxphilosophic May 13 2009, 07:17:56 UTC

this is probably the best thing you've ever posted.

eightbitguy May 13 2009, 11:30:06 UTC

Really? I kinda feel its a bit too chaotic. I was going to re-work it sometime this week, but i do like that it started out as basically an album review and evolved into something totally different.

Definitely evolved into something other than a review waxphilosophic May 19 2009, 18:27:26 UTC

This is Zac btw ( ... )

Re: Definitely evolved into something other than a review eightbitguy May 20 2009, 10:09:17 UTC

Yeah, I do like it a lot. Anything that I change will just be clarifying what it is, and structuring it better (ie: name the band & flesh out the intro, etc). And maybe make the transitions more flowy, instead of abrupt. We'll see. I plan on letting it settle for a while longer before I mess with it. But I also have plans to take parts of this story (the girl part) and work it into a longer essay, so I might steal from this for that. But I have other projects to finish first. Thanks for the comments =)