Four Months of Pot-Luck Dinners: A Christmas Story

[eightbitguy]

J. Benjamin Davis

11/12/08

English 309

Four Months of Pot-Luck Dinners: A Christmas Story

Christmas at my grandmother’s house was always a treat. The family would gather around a large, makeshift table that was really a plywood ping-pong table (sans net) on several sawhorses, haphazardly covered with large tablecloths. After

Comments

[ardentdelirium]

comma after "hour" in the last line. I like this version better--more detail, but not gory detail.

[eightbitguy]

Yeah, this is the version I turned in. It took like 5 completely seperate drafts to really get a good one. But I think thats the point of the class, really.