Fic: You Strike the Right Chord in Me

[ehasu]

My last fic before the season ends! omgI'msonervous.

Title: You Strike the Right Chord in Me
Author: K
Pairing: Logan/Veronica, Lilly, Duncan
Word Count: 2002
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A trip to the beach is certainly more enticing than a trip to the dentist.
Spoilers: Everything through 2x21. Absolutely NO spoilers or speculation for 2x22

Comments

[agurkis]

Wonderful, I love how you left the ending just hanging, it really fitted the story.

And you've not Logan and Veronica nailed, I can really feel that it's them talking. And you got the snark down too, which is so hard, but you did it brilliantly! ♥

[ehasu]

Thanks so much! I can't see Logan and Veronica having a typically "happy" ending at the moment, so an open-ended one seemed to fit. :)

[natalexx]

Well, you sure are productive! I enjoyed this. I always like the idea of Logan having some feelings for Veronica before Lilly's death. And the emphasis on how completely Veronica has changed since then is one of my favorite things about the show, so I like to see that explored in fic.

"No, I don't think so," Veronica answers after a minute of silence, "but that's not necessarily a bad thing."

See, that's exactly what I'd like to hear Veronica say to close the second season end. And if it's on the beach with Logan, so much the better. *g*

[ehasu]

You say 'productive,' I say 'obsessive,' heh. I've always been intrigued by the dynamic between Logan and Veronica before Lilly died, and writing my interpretation of it was definitely fun.

Thanks for the feedback!

[havemy_heart]

*tries in vain to scroll down more*

That's it? Where's the rest?

I liked this look into their *very* complicated relationship. It just seemed to end abruptly. I was hoping for a little more to their conversation than that. It has a slightly hopeful tone to it though, which is good.

[ehasu]

Hopeful is what I was going for, because I can't see them having a perfectly happy ending at this point in time, so an open-ended one seemed best for this situation. Still, I agree that it seemed abrupt, and I'll definitely take that into account! Thanks :D

[gabfic]

i'm going to agree on the "loved it but wha? wait!? over already?"

maybe one more teeny tiny line about Logan's reaction to her words? does he continue to look at her, or turn to the ocean? tiny tiny line really. that's it...

[ehasu]

Duly noted! :) I'm happy you enjoyed it, though.

[bitterflo]

Awww, lovely Fic. Very nice. *nods*

[ehasu]

*waves hello* Thanks so much!

[fifteen12]

Beautiful fic! I really liked it!

[ehasu]

Aw, thanks so much! :D