{Poetry - JaeSu} To all the world, the love I gave, it’s thee

[egoisticfreak]

Title: To all the world, the love I gave, it’s thee
Pairng: JaeSu
Genre: Romance, Angst
Length: Poetry
Author: egoisticfreak
Summary: Jaejoong’s heart is all he has…and it's gone.
A/N: It’s raining and I’m loving it….XD

To all the world, the love I gave, it’s thee

To all the world, the love I gave, it’s thee
Embrace the air in between, lips so young
Of

Comments

[hmtermulo]

ahhh so angsty...it hurts so good....

hahahha!!! lol XD

[egoisticfreak]

Masochista! ahahaha! Mehash sniffles!

[hmtermulo]

hala. feel better my SU <3 *hugs*

[egoisticfreak]

Hugs! Kisses! Glomps!

[jinsane226]

Wow.. BB it's beautifully written.
Makes me a bit depressed since my poetry muse has long since left me... T___________T
I ♥ this

[egoisticfreak]

Oh BB! i miss you! ~huggles!~

It's raining and I had a very angsty dream...I cannot help to write this...XD

[jinsane226]

oh I wish it was raining, it's all sunny and such... the rain puts me in such peace.
XD
I've missed you too, I hope you enjoyed the last spammage I sent of Susu.
I'm working on a second consecutive post spam of Chun(cuz I'm so bored at work) since I just posted one less then an hourago in honor of his b-day XD

[egoisticfreak]

Really?! Yes...Spam more PIMP Chun!

[yoosu_sarang]

meh misses you too XD
update! update!

[egoisticfreak]

I know... T___T

I lost my juice ... and I'm retrieving it with all my might...XD

Gomen.... T.T

[tofuvanilla22]

wow i loved the weather too!n_n and i spam for
romance during rainy days..why do people love angst?kyaaa
hehehe...

[egoisticfreak]

Blame it on my dream while being in my lovey dovey mode...

T__T

[weerainbow]

Poetry!!! Yey!!!

There's a really lovely feel to this poem, and even though it's sad it's still beautiful :o)

The imagery in it is very strong, I like that. Even the words you chose in the second part feel sharp like the "glass pieces scattered" making it seem even more real.

[egoisticfreak]

Thank You!

~hugs...XD

When i wrote this one... I feel like my wriitng juice will come back..XD