Six Hours

Jun 16, 2012 16:48


Title: Six Hours

Author eglantine_br

Rating G

Word Count 883

Six Hours

Day broke. William had intended to be useful.

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fiction, bush, pre-canon story

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vespican June 17 2012, 16:37:25 UTC
Very well done.
Dave

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eglantine_br June 17 2012, 21:26:30 UTC
I am so pleased that it seemed good to you. I know that really it was the job of the first Lt. to make up the watches. Oh well.

I have myself felt a 200 ft ferry rock enough to spill coffee. (And take air and slap,) I tried to capture that.

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bauhiniakapok September 27 2016, 04:06:30 UTC
I loved the coffee detail. I take ferries regularly, big stable high speed catamarans, from Guangzhou/Canton to Hong Kong, but they never do more than rock gently. I suppose it is because most of the way is along the Pearl River or sheltered inner waterways. To be honest I think I'd be terrified if we were ever rocked enough to spill coffee, because that's just not what they do.

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