The Morning and the Evening

[eglantine_br]

Title: The Evening and the Morning

Author Eglantine_br

Rating G

Word Count 975

We come to Muzillac

The Evening and the Morning

Archie was facing into the sun. The sky dazzled his vision.

But he could see. He could see how the dark brows were drawn down over Horatio's nose. He could see how Horatio's pale hands were tight on the unfamiliar reins. Horatio

Comments

[amaraal]

Beautifully written, as always. Two different points of view.

I loved Mariette watching the bird.
War must be terrible. I'm glad we have no experience of that ourselves. It costs so much. No only lives, but sanity too.

Btw: When is your first book published? :)

[eglantine_br]

Yes. I am thinking here about the damage to Mariette and her town, as well as to Archie and the men of the Indy.

Civil upheaval is damaging, even when the result is more just in the end.

[bauhiniakapok]

I love love love Matthews hugging shivering Archie. There is something so sweet about the men looking after their young officers - the interplay of rank and rules and respect and affection.