The Influence

[eglantine_br]

The Influence

Author Eglantine_br

Kit Marlowe

800 words

The Influence

It had gotten worse overnight. Yesterday he had been tired, today he shivered and burned. Acrid sweat slicked his neck and thighs, stung his face. Each heartbeat pained his head, and coughing made that worse as it ripped at his throat. Kit could not stop coughing though.

Geoff and

Comments

[ba1126]

Very enjoyable!Thanks for sharing!

[charliecochrane]

Lovely jubbly. I now want a marchpane hare...

[nodbear]

a marchpane hare sounds just right - as does the orange drink.

and Kits thoughts turning to home and its childhood comfort- touching and very believable