A Cold Sea of Kindness

Feb 15, 2014 15:57


Title: The Cold Sea of Kindness

Author Eglantine_br

Rating R for Smut

Word Count 1671

The Cold Sea of Kindness

He had been watching William Bush. He had, he supposed, a particular interest in the man. Watching was easy-- the fellow was not alert to such a thing, unaware of a steady gaze and the mind that drove it. Bush was a competent sailor, at least ( Read more... )

fiction, horatio archie

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anteros_lmc February 15 2014, 22:29:50 UTC
That made me squirm. It's so delicious and so right.

It was Archie's great sin that he had not.
All the perfumes of Arabia....I wonder how many others lived with that sin? Their names are still carved in the walls of Bitche.

Skin had a hunger of its own, quite apart from an aching heart, or an aching cock.
Yes - skin!! This is so, so true but I have never known anyone to put it into words so perfectly.

silver to Archie's gold
That made me melt....

Any you remembered Archie's birthday! I'm so pleased :)

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eglantine_br February 15 2014, 23:06:30 UTC
Fun to write the same thing from both sides. It gives the reader insight I think. To see what do and don't say to each other.

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