doesn't mean i'm hurt, doesn't mean i didn't get what i deserved

Sep 12, 2009 21:11

Is it bright where you are? Have the people changed?
Does it make you happy you're so strange? He sits in a café, calm and content, browsing the newspaper that lies in front of him. The coffee that rests to his right has gone cold; the steam has long since stopped reaching for the ceiling. He still doesn’t know why he bought the coffee - he ( Read more... )

fan fiction, character: ben

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zelda_zee September 29 2009, 06:37:59 UTC
I really liked this! Your Ben POV is excellent. I especially liked the little details about the coffee and the newspaper at the beginning.

It’s one of the perks of a ruined man - with nothing to lose, they will follow you to the ends of the Earth.

I liked this a lot too. Nicely perceptive about Sayid.

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eggxmagnet September 30 2009, 20:32:26 UTC
Oh thank you! Glad you like it :)

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