FIC: Fast Fuse (Mint Royale 7/8)

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Title: Fast Fuse
Pairing: Bank Robber/Getaway Driver
Summary: Nearly 3 years after their first encounter, robber and driver meet again.
Word count: 3,320 (this part)
Rating: NC-17 overall
Disclaimer: I gave them new names and all, but I don't own Mint Royale, or their video, or Julian and Noel for that matter. No

Comments

[silent_fields]

The "I know you" speech still leaves me breathless.

[eggnogged]

<3 <3 <3!

You know, everyone was saying 'Poor Jon!' at the last part, and I kept thinking, 'Yikes, wait until the next one.' >.>

[savanna_says_hi]

So I technically couldn't see the last few chapters coz I'm not 18, but I logged out, lied, and read them anyway. Oh, cheating the system. But anyway, I feel bad coz I couldn't comment until now, but OH DEAR. I think I may cry.

Jon pulls back a little bit, just enough so he can brush Elliot’s fringe out of the way and kiss his forehead, “Try not to seduce the bad guy next time, yeah?”

GUH. I am heartbroken. In a...good...way. <3

[eggnogged]

I'm corrupting teens with porn, aaaaah! XD

I'm really glad you liked despite the heartbreak, thank you for commenting. <3

[savanna_says_hi]

I'm 17, and to my way of thinking, that's close enough to 18 for it not to matter. XD

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I was reading and writing porn at 17 too, so I can't judge. XD

[thirstyrobot]

I'm sorry, this is not going to be a very good comment, because ALK;DFJDSFKLJ FIX IT FIX IT FIX IT.

Um. *breathes* I will still love you and still think this is amazing whatever happens, of course. But I am wearing a very hopeful look through my gut-wrenched tears (like giving up a lung, indeed) at the fact that there's still one more to go and that maybemaybemaybe.

And holy crap, I really wish I could draw, because I'm right there with Jon on getting a bit hot and bothered at Elliot looking all cop-like and SRS BZNS, and that so needs drawing.

Oh, and Jon's I know you speech is perfect. ♥

Now I know the real reason you're staggering the chapters-- two back to back is just about more than the human heart can take.

*goes back to being a twitchy puddle in the corner*

[eggnogged]

*mega hugs*

OH MAN, I would LOVE for someone to draw that scene. *______* I can't even draw stick figures. XD I'd make this whole thing into a porny graphic novel if I could!

I didn't mean to turn you into a twitchy puddle! <3 <3 <3 And again, thank you for your loverly feedback, it fills me with glee!

[xthursdaynextx]

Ohhhh I love all the new extra little bits at the raid. And the ending. The ending... I didn't cry this time but still when he says 'Please don't go' I can hear it in my head so clearly. Poor Jon <3

[eggnogged]

Glad you liked the changes to the raid, your feedback on the first draft really helped, and I'm glad I extended it. :)

Thank you!

[xo_oldgreggory]

*GASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSP*

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>:D