FIC: Fast Fuse (Mint Royale 6/8)

Apr 05, 2010 12:19

Title: Fast Fuse
Pairing: Bank Robber/Getaway Driver
Summary: Nearly 3 years after their first encounter, robber and driver meet again.
Word count: 2,345 (this part)
Rating: NC-17 overall
Disclaimer: I gave them new names and all, but I don't own Mint Royale, or their video, or Julian and Noel for that matter. No harm is meant.
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the_reverand April 9 2010, 02:15:00 UTC
He wants to lean his head down and tell him, whisper the words in his ear like a dirty little secret. He keeps the words to himself, but thinks them with every thrust.

Oh, Jon. <3

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eggnogged April 9 2010, 02:28:43 UTC
Yep, he's got it bad. XD <3

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real_sick_dream April 9 2010, 02:19:45 UTC
THIS is so addicting. I can't wait to see how it ends but I don't want it to end really :-P

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eggnogged April 9 2010, 02:32:35 UTC
Thank you, that's a very nice compliment! <3 Very pleased you like, and thanks for commenting. :)

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otherbitch April 9 2010, 02:23:07 UTC
Awwwww...poor Jon.

I'm really enjoying this! Don't hurt him too badly, though, ok? ;)

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eggnogged April 9 2010, 02:36:03 UTC
I'll try, but torturing fictional characters is kind of fun. >.>

Really glad you're enjoying, thanks for taking the time to comment! <3

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mandybling April 9 2010, 02:50:59 UTC
*whimper* I gotta' bad feeling about this. I'm biting my nails in anticipation.

Poor Jon is right.... *meep* Elliot loves him too. He has to. Damnit! HE HAS TO!

OK, I'm done.

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eggnogged April 9 2010, 03:16:20 UTC
:D

I do enjoy torturing Jon and the people reading my fic.

Thanks for commenting! <3

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mandybling April 9 2010, 03:22:22 UTC
It's the good kind of torture. I'm not truly complaining. Just in love with the story is all. <3

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silent_fields April 9 2010, 03:40:34 UTC
So much in so little space. I love that small window of time Jon now has access to before Elliot become "Elliot", Elliot's possessiveness being tinted with desperation, and how Jon's just about ready to push over the edge and put words to the feelings between them.

“I want you to remember this,” Elliot gasps in his ear, voice rough and gravelly, “so that when you let someone else do this, you’ll think of me.”

<3

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eggnogged April 9 2010, 14:36:08 UTC
Again with the flailing. <3 <3 <3 Thank yoooooou!

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