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FIC: Fast Fuse (Mint Royale 4/8)

Apr 01, 2010 14:45

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mandybling April 6 2010, 21:03:05 UTC

Oh I do love this story line. You're so good.

eggnogged April 6 2010, 22:55:17 UTC

Thank you so much! <3

mandybling April 6 2010, 22:57:01 UTC

You're welcome.

thirstyrobot April 6 2010, 22:42:27 UTC

This is really just the thing to have magically delivered with my after-work beer. :D

I am flailing back and forth between YAY AWWW LOOK AT THE CUTE COUPLE STUFF and my heart breaking a little bit that it isn't real. ;__; Jon can’t tell if it’s because they’re in the pub and they’re supposed to act like a couple, or if it’s because he really wants the contact. Yeah, just like that, really. Oh, to see what's going on in that madly coiffed head! But I mean, breakfast reservations! You don't do that if you don't want it to be real just a little bit, right? Right? *flails moar*

Also, shop blowjob = ♥

I may drop dead of the utter aceness. Is it time for tomorrow's chapter yet? :D

eggnogged April 6 2010, 23:57:13 UTC

Beer + fic is a pretty good combo, I agree.

Breakfast reservations are serious business, aren't they? Or maybe that place just makes reallllly good pancakes. >.>

Your comments are making me blush, ilu! Thanks for reading (and pimping)! <3

Edited for weird typo fail. XD

internetdream April 6 2010, 22:46:10 UTC

love love love loveeee ♥

I also love the way you end the chapters for some reason. They seem to say so much in just one final sentence.

eggnogged April 6 2010, 23:04:46 UTC

I hadn't really realized it, but it's true that they've all sort of ended in a kind of punchline so far. XD

Thank you! <3

internetdream April 6 2010, 23:48:47 UTC

It's brilliant! Keep up with it <33

the_reverand April 7 2010, 00:33:39 UTC

I want to reply with YAYYYYY everytime but that's not very constructive, is it?

Apart from momma!Jon, my favorite scene in this part is probably just that bit where they're having a fairly normal conversation while Elliot's getting undressed. It just feels so couple-y and lovely. :)

eggnogged April 7 2010, 01:06:21 UTC

YAYYYY is a perfect comment, especially considering how many times you've read this thing already! XD

That scene is my favourite out of this chapter, I think. :)

xo_oldgreggory April 7 2010, 05:10:22 UTC

*DREAMYYYYY SIGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*
Please let them have a happy ending :(

eggnogged April 7 2010, 14:30:21 UTC

<3! Still 4 more parts to come, a lot can happen. ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting bb!