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[eggcentric]

Title: Verisimilitude
Fandom: Tales of the Abyss
Chapter: Prologue
Characters: Just Guy and Luke for this chapter.
Genre: General/Drama (I highly recommend one listens to Sheaf of Soul when reading this.)
Rating: PG13 for now.
Summary: If Luke had just one tiny crack in his resolve, would Guy take advantage of it? Yes, of course he would. For

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[vincibility]

Guy, you are the bestest friend a Luke could ever have.
Anyway, your characterization rocks! :D

[crown_in_hand]

I've been following your fiction for two or three years now. This livejournal hasn't updated for two or three years, so what that actually means is that I reread these gems every few months when I miss the hit of good fanfiction.

When I played the Tales of the Abyss, I could never grasp the inconsistencies in Guy's character. First he's the loyalest friend in the world--then you learn he's been nursing this deep hatred for Luke all along, throwing off all of his previous actions. When and why did Guy let this hatred go? How did Luke earn his loyalty? And your writing... in--what, less than two thousand words?--creates this wholesome image of Guy. You effortlessly create his character. And reading your fiction is like the sweetest hit for all of my unsatisfied feelings from ToA.

Bravo. Hope you're doing well, and tell me if you ever publish any more fiction (online or professionally!)