Touched

Dec 19, 2010 02:18

Author: Regency

Title: Touched

Rating: G

Spoilers: up to Breach, For King and Country; speculation and AU beyond.

Word count: ~2,571

Pairing: none in particular (Will/Helen UST and Helen/John UST if you squint)

Summary: Will Zimmerman will always believe in Magnus first and foremost. Adam thinks this a sweet trait that may someday be the ( Read more... )

rated: g, pairing: helen/will, one shot, genre: friendship, fandom: sanctuary, all: fanfiction

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querulouspeg December 19 2010, 13:00:52 UTC
*takes deep breath* angsty and dark. Nice work.

In particular I like these lines: "She is a consummate performer for those in her thrall and Adam knows because, once, he lived within it as well."

and "Will wonders if it’s standard operating procedure for the men in Magnus’ orbit to go mad. They go mad with love, or bloodlust, or vengeance. Brilliant men with greater minds than his have thrown themselves from cliffs in her name and he has to wonder if he’s next."

With the hiatus looming before us, you'll have to keep us fed with angst!

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egalitarianmuse December 19 2010, 17:30:48 UTC
You know I can do that. I've quite a number of angsty things on the backburner that I hope you'll like. Given that I've now got the free time to make 'em good, expect much, much angsty darkness.

Glad those lines appealed to you. They really bring out the shades of grey that I think hover around Magnus despite her intent to do good for all the abnormal of the world. It doesn't make her bad, but it does make her interesting.

Anywho, thank you so much for reading and letting me know what you thought. I appreciate it.

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egalitarianmuse December 19 2010, 17:18:21 UTC
♥ Thank you. ♥

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karlamartinova December 19 2010, 15:14:24 UTC
This is the absolutely perfect view if Helen's and Wills relationship, I see them this way and I love you for putting into words:)

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egalitarianmuse December 19 2010, 17:12:46 UTC
Aww, thank you. I"m glad I managed to do exactly what I wanted to do then. Thank you for letting me know what you thought. :)

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fellowshipper December 19 2010, 18:37:11 UTC
Nigel and James, they should be here now, completing this hapless polygon and seeing it to its conclusion. She still cannot imagine a future without them though she has already lived it.

This line got me a bit teary. :( Lovely work.

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egalitarianmuse December 19 2010, 19:47:26 UTC
Thanks. I have such warm, fuzzy feelings for the Five. It's hard not to include them in every Sanctuary fic I write.

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hazyjay December 19 2010, 21:51:25 UTC
Absolutely perfect. I adore your writing, please write more! Xo

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egalitarianmuse December 19 2010, 22:32:31 UTC
I don't think I could stop writing if I tried, I just love it too much. Thanks for reading! :D

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