Comments | egalitarianmuse: Dying A Little With the Wings

egalitarianmuse

Dying A Little With the Wings

Aug 13, 2010 15:08

Author: Regency
Title: Dying A Little With the Wings
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Spoilers: none
Rating: PG for mature themes
Pairing: Reid/Morgan
Word count: ~719
Warning: non-graphic reference to serious injury.
Summary: Steps to a plane crash, as lived by Spencer Reid and Derek Morgan
Author’s Notes: Written for the comment_fic prompt, Criminal Minds, Reid/Morgan, Plane ( Read more... )

rated: pg, slash, fandom: criminal minds, one shot, pairing: reid/morgan, all: fanfiction, comment_fic

Comments 14

maldeluxx August 13 2010, 23:29:37 UTC

This feels like reading Braille, all those dots under fingers... and then wonder if there's hope or not... I really need to buy and read The Little Prince. O.o

egalitarianmuse August 14 2010, 00:48:03 UTC

Abandon hope all ye who enter here. Yeah, I felt the same way writing it. I wasn't sure there was going to be a happy ending. I mean, it was a plane crash.

Thank you for reading and letting me know what you think.

gothabilly13 August 13 2010, 23:39:47 UTC

WOW this was a very intense little piece. Really moved me. Great job darling

egalitarianmuse August 14 2010, 00:28:10 UTC

Thanks, I'm happy it worked for you.

rowena_dawson August 14 2010, 04:13:39 UTC

Whoa. Great. Stuff.

I loved the cuts to start each segment. It was very powerful.

egalitarianmuse August 14 2010, 04:42:20 UTC

Thanks! It's awesome that you like it. I wasn't sure anyone would. I'm glad the cut thing worked out since I wasn't sure whether it looked like I just didn't know what I was doing there. Anywho, thank you one more time.

lucianwolf August 14 2010, 04:41:15 UTC

I loved that I was never sure if they were going to live.

Also, the story and the writing and ... !

Well done. :)

egalitarianmuse August 14 2010, 04:51:45 UTC

Thank you! I admit I didn't know if they were going to live either. A plane crash is usually a pretty one-way trip, so I thought I'd give it a bit of a better ending, even if it wasn't super happy.

And I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. It always brightens up my day to read that.

scotchsour September 23 2010, 12:59:14 UTC

I could be wrong but plane crashes on average are more likely to have survivors, who well survive.

egalitarianmuse September 23 2010, 13:15:18 UTC

That's...reassuring? I mean, I imagine it would depend on where they crashed. I'm thinking the odds for someone who crashed into ground would be worse and that someone who crashed in water is more likely to have a risk of drowning than dying in the crash itself, no? I could certainly be wrong about that though.

I could be missing your point though. :?

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egalitarianmuse August 14 2010, 18:26:36 UTC

Thank you for reading and letting me know what you thought. I really appreciate it.