First, unfirst

[efcia]

Fandom: Inception
Genre: Romance, hurt/comfort
Pairing: Arthur/Ariadne
Rating: G

It’s freezing cold, their breaths are coming out in steam, clearly visible in the darkness of winter’s evening.

Ariadne shivers and nestles her head against Arthur’s arm. He doesn’t have any problems in reading her, as always, and embraces her with his arm, putting her

Comments

[sandie_eggo]

Aww, I like this. It's such a different take on their first meeting. Very creative.

I like how you explained their actual first meeting (before the accident) using something simple--her hair--as the first trigger that Arthur fell in love with about Ariadne. And then to use it again after his amnesia was a nice touch.

I actually like the entire way you described their first meeting, from Arthur's point of view.

I'm amused by Ariadne's explanation of Arthur's clothes as a way for compensating for something. :) I've never thought of it that way, but it's kind of amusing to think so.

Nicely done!

[efcia]

Thanks much for your lovely reply! There's many stories where Ariadne is the one, who fell in love and, even though is kind of sweet, I'm not exactly sure if Ariadne's first impression has to be that nice. Anyway, I'm glad you like it!

[dayofcaligula]

This is very sweet. Your take on their love at first sight is interesting, on how it specifically conflicts with Ariadne's memory and perception on Arthur's memory.

Thank you for this!

[efcia]

Thanks a lot!