Comments | eerian_sadow: Manual Recovery, a Transformers Animated fic

eerian_sadow

Manual Recovery, a Transformers Animated fic

Feb 02, 2011 01:21

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rare pairings, one shots, fic in my journal, transformers animated, writing, transformers, fanfic

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eerian_sadow February 2 2011, 07:51:50 UTC

:D thank you! i'm glad that you were curious enough to look, glad that i kept you around long enough to finish and glad that you enjoyed it. ^_^

bookworm_faith February 2 2011, 12:11:05 UTC

Awwww, Jazz is such a sweetheart. (hehe, I see Yoketron subscribed to 'tough love' as a training method)

eerian_sadow February 2 2011, 19:24:24 UTC

Jazz is a sweetie. ^_^ (and yes. yes he did. but those were the cleanest floors ever! no matter who was in training at the time.)

bookworm_faith February 3 2011, 07:04:26 UTC

(I'll bet they were so shiny you could see your face in em XD)

eerian_sadow February 3 2011, 08:01:03 UTC

(totally. hotel floors have nothing on Yoketron's dojo.)

anavidbookworm February 2 2011, 14:44:02 UTC

This is a very enjoyable glimpse of the two of them. I loved how you threw in elements from the different verses (Arcee's swords & Jazz's old coloring) but made them all work together. I think it gives a richer picture and new dimension to this verse.

eerian_sadow February 2 2011, 19:26:56 UTC

thank you! i'm glad you liked it. ^_^ wasn't so much that i incorporated other 'verses, though; i used their toys. TFA Arcee comes with some wicked looking swords, and Freeway Jazz has a silver and white paint scheme. (this is not to say that i don't incorporate other 'verse elements in fics, just that i didn't do it here.)

anavidbookworm February 2 2011, 20:35:52 UTC

I didn't even think of the toys when you gave the descriptions. I thought you were referring to IDW's Arcee and the movieverse's Jazz. I still like it either way so thanks. :)

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eerian_sadow February 2 2011, 19:28:10 UTC

thank you. ^_^ seemed the sort of thing he'd do.

chibirisuchan February 2 2011, 16:58:48 UTC

heee. Man, carrying water in your hands when your hands are made of metal that has to have joints to be able to flex and therefore isn't even remotely watertight? They'd be at it all night. Apparently Yoketron was Mr. Miyagi crossed with Coyote... :D

eerian_sadow February 2 2011, 19:31:19 UTC

well, she had a bucket. but the solvent was stored a couple rooms away. Yoketron made his students appreciate the finer things in life, like indoor plumbing and faucets.

(though some of the delinquents he trained may very well have had to fill that tub with only their hands. Lockdown may have needed that extra bit of negative reinforcement.)