This was beautifully done darlin' I made myself read through the sadness *wibbles lots* fantastic fic. I am firmly sat on my denial sofa I saved you a seat. Excellent fill to the prompt at that moment of comfort between OP and Jazz, was just wonderfully done, a beautifully tragic moment, I loved it <3
thank you. i did warn you that it was rough and i'm glad you stuck with it. would you believe i almost didn't write that scene with Optimus at the end? the bunny insisted that it didn't work and i disagreed--i'm glad i won, since you like it so. ^_^
Poor Sari, poor Jazz... *hugs them both* :( They both need lots of caring friends right now, it seems... And it seems that they do, as long as they remember.
this was a hard piece to write. they both hurt so much and they need so much support, both from each other and from their friends, and they're losing so much of it when they need it most. Optimus has no intention of letting either of them stew in their grief, though.
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thank you. i did warn you that it was rough and i'm glad you stuck with it. would you believe i almost didn't write that scene with Optimus at the end? the bunny insisted that it didn't work and i disagreed--i'm glad i won, since you like it so. ^_^
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And oh yeah, lovely ficcie Eerian ;_;
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Wonderful job. *hugs*
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this was a hard piece to write. they both hurt so much and they need so much support, both from each other and from their friends, and they're losing so much of it when they need it most. Optimus has no intention of letting either of them stew in their grief, though.
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Just read ante_luce's Five Times someone woke up to find Jazz in the room, and One time they didn't.
It was too much. T_______T
*Denial couching*
Sari... and Jazz... and Optimus...
Wonderful portrayals. Wonderful fic. T_T
*wibbles and hunkers down with tissue box*
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thank you; i'm glad you liked it despite the sads.
*hands over more tissues as needed*
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*whimper* ;~;
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