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eerian_sadow

Hiding, an Animated one shot

May 30, 2009 21:47

Title: Hiding
Universe: Animated (Mother-Creator AU)
Rating: G
Characters: the Allspark, unnamed Autobots
Summary: the only way she could see to end their war was to leave them.
Warnings: none
Author's Notes: surprisingly easy to write, once i realized that i wanted to be writing Animated instead of Avalonverse.

( They lived in harmony for so long that she didn't see the problem until it was too late. )

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Comments 8

mmouse15 May 31 2009, 04:48:13 UTC

This bunny should still be nibbling at your ankles - what happens when she gets woken by Optimus and his team? Hm?

Seriously, this is lovely and I really like your language usage here. It sounds like the beginning of a myth story and I like it very much.

I hope you're having fun at Botcon!

eerian_sadow May 31 2009, 04:54:34 UTC

belive me when i say the bunnie continues to nibble. things get interesting when Optimus and his team find her. ^_^

i'm glad you like it. (very glad, since she's created and entire AU for me, slaggit) i'm having lots of fun with the language and word usage--and i think you've hit it spot on with your myth comparison there, though i hadn't intended to go that way. (i do like that idea tho)

and we are having tons of fun at Botcon, despite some fail on the part of some linejumpers this morning at Peter Cullen's autograph signing.

squareofme May 31 2009, 06:26:25 UTC

Aw, what a nice mech. Though I'm not sure that he really needed any convincing, given his reverence for her. :3

eerian_sadow May 31 2009, 15:38:39 UTC

well, he needed a little convincing. she was asking him to go AWOL from the army to hide her, after all.

fierceawakening August 15 2009, 15:55:27 UTC

I like the ideas in this one. I was honestly wondering just what the Allspark as you've written her here would think of 'Cons, as she's got a distinctly Autobot-like personality.

I was wondering why she wouldn't try to be more involved when some of her kids turned out violent and cruel. I think your "She figured it was sibling rivalry that would work itself out in the end" explanation is an interesting one.

eerian_sadow August 15 2009, 21:47:21 UTC

it's not so much that she's got an autobot-like personality, just a very maternal one. ^_^

in my head cannon, she did try to be more involved, once she realized what was going on; i just haven't written that yet. i'm glad you like that particular explaination.

fierceawakening August 15 2009, 22:04:39 UTC

it's not so much that she's got an autobot-like personality, just a very maternal one. ^_^

Yeah, good point.

in my head canon, she did try to be more involved, once she realized what was going on; i just haven't written that yet.

*nodsnods* I've found myself spending all day today wondering just how she felt when Megatron found her again and briefly stole her.

Heh, you must be good at this. Your characters are giving me bunnies... :)

Though I kind of don't want to know, because reading that one would require even more tissues than reading the others, I think... *sniffles a bit just thinking how sad it would have to be*

(btw I just posted part 2 of one of my fanfics a little bit ago, if you'd like to read mine too...)

eerian_sadow August 16 2009, 04:35:54 UTC

i can't decide if i'm going to do the Megatron piece next or the Optimus piece, because i want to explore both. it'll be interesting either way. ^_^ (though the fact that you're specifically asking about Megatron is likely to speed that particular story along.)

bunnies? really? that's so flattering. ^_^

oh, absolutely! *scurries off to read*