last two fic requests from the october round

[eerian_sadow]

Title: Hope
Universe: G1, Avalon AU
Rating: PG
Word Count: 590

Notes: for sister_dear, who wanted some minibot fic. I really tried for Windcharger, but I just didn’t have enough time to do the homework I needed to really get his voice down. Maybe next time, love. Also, I’m not sure Gears is Gears enough, but I like this the way it stands right now.

Comments

[sister_dear]

He's plenty Gears enough. That last bit of dialogue is all him. <3

Also, mm, don't see Ratchet and Skyfire together much. We likes it, precious.

[eerian_sadow]

ah good. i was worried about that. ^^

i know we don't! it was a pairing that i was pretty excited to write. glad you enjoyed.

[okami_myrrhibis]

Nice on Skyfire...

As for Gears - is this set post 86-movie? Cuz if so, CJ was in Unicron w/ Jazz, WC was dead as Jack - but Pipes, Powerglide, and Cosmos aren't shown/mentioned....

Otherwise, your Gears-voice fits him nicely.

[eerian_sadow]

thanks!

and yes. post 86 movie. so the reader knows that windcharger is dead, but the wereabouts of the others are up in the air. at least at the moment. this is also set in the avalon AU, so i can kind of do what i want with it. i liked having cliffjumper in autobot city, rather than on the moonbase, though i'm not sure why i liked that better.

glad you thought i had his voice right.

[heslestor]

Was smiling like a loon at the end of the Gears one. Gonna have to go find more fics about the minibots now.

Awww for Ratchet and Skyfire bonding time. Wish there was more of this pairing out there. *feels all warm and fuzzy* Now has a sudden craving for Ratchet/Skyfire/Perceptor. *headdesk* Need to learn to write my own stories faster.

P.S. There's just a very few small errors that I saw, like Sideswipe not being capitalized. Thought you'd like to know.

[eerian_sadow]

glad to have put a smile on your face. ^^ i'm going to have to write more fic about the minibots now.

i kind of wish there was more for this pairing now, too. it was interesting to write.

and thanks for bringing my attention to the lack of capitalization there. i'll go fix it.

[tainry]

Oh, Gears. ::beams:: <333333333333333333333

Skyfire/Ratchet is very wonderful, and I am very happy to see more of it. Eeee! <333333333333333333333333333

[eerian_sadow]

so very glad you liked them. ^^

[dark_daebereth]

Both very nice, especially that last one, highlights the difference and similarities and just... makes it so real.
And dammit girl, you mention Jazz and post-movie and make me think of that *fantastic* Prowl's-death-scene you wrote and I tear up. HOW YOU DO THIS IN ONE WORD?!

[eerian_sadow]

thanks, love.

...i'm just that good? I'M SORRY!!!!

[dark_daebereth]

^^ Yeah, I think I'm going to have to put it down as you being that good. Because damn, every time!

[eerian_sadow]

yay! i like being that good. ^^