song

[eebadee]

hi, friends. im a little nervous about sharing this, but i figured that i trust you enough to let you read it. its a song...er, not so much as a song, because i dont have a melody to go with it, but a poem. i was all philisophical and nostalgic when i wrote it. im willing to take constructive critism...and if this includes calling me a stalker, go

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[wrong___number]

EB.

That is beautiful.

It makes me want to fall in love. Like, even more than I already do.

[eebadee]

no, i wasnt going for a rhyme scheme. chucky would love you- nobody understood about rhyme schemes in class when we were doing our poetry unit, and he like, called me stupid, but yeah- you picked it up right out of the poem/song and brought it up. go kayla! and the words just worked that way. it was kinda like...i wrote it all in one sitting. which usually happens with songs/poetry, but i dont think ive written anything that good. i figured out the secret to writing, but shhh....im not telling you what it is. theres a pattern in all my favorite songs, and its like...what makes them awesome.

[eebadee]

hey! the process works, doesnt it?

AWESOME!

[jessdamisfit14]

ebbles thats great, see u have a talent in poetry/song writing... lol anyway, its really good, and i know that came from ur heart. .. it kind of makes me wonder what the hell i'm doing with my love like though.. (right now) i really don't have 1, unless u count anthony lol, well cyah at the party ebbles!

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