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between the lines that divide your world from mine part 4/?

Apr 09, 2011 22:29

Title: between the lines that divide your world from mine
Characters: rachel berry, noah puckerman, santana lopez, brittany pierce and appearances by many others
Pairing: puck/rachel
Rating: R
Word Count: 4105
Spoilers: None
Summary: An AU puck/rachel love story set in the world of surgery and on call rooms. aka Grey's Anatomy.

A/N: So sorry this has ( Read more... )

pairing: puck/rachel, between the lines that divide your world, character: noah puckerman, character: rachel berry

Comments 6

nienna87 April 10 2011, 03:24:52 UTC

Yay! an update :) This makes me happy. I love this story so much! Its so awesome. Loved the drunk singing lol. Great update I definitely can't wait for more!

kimmi_watch April 10 2011, 09:13:56 UTC

Woo hoo. I love this story. Like, seriously.

Can't wait to see what Noah will do to convince her that they can have a relationship.

nova802 April 10 2011, 10:35:23 UTC

Beautifully written bb! I have to admit that I do feel at a disadvantage not knowing the universe, but you make it very clear that whatever her issues are with her mother, they are long-standing and seriously getting in the way of her making connections with people. I can't wait to see how Puck reacts--whether he'll continue pursuing her or whether she'll have to make the next move!

jaydenbell April 10 2011, 14:54:46 UTC

I only just joined this comm a little while ago, so I'm catching up on some fic and WIPs. When I saw the summary and premise of the story, I was immediately drawn in. I'm not really a Grey's fan (I don't hate it, I just don't watch it, don't spend much time watching tv), but this is excellent. I can tell where some of the characters overlap and are similar, which is great. And even though, given this story is so AU, the characters are a bit OOC, I still love it. They're all there and they all have their parts and fit in in the same ways they should in a world like this.
Very well done and I can't wait to read more of it!!

uniquegrl7 April 11 2011, 03:53:32 UTC

I loved this chapter. I like the slight changes you made to the plot and I love Brittany's character. I'm glad Rachel sings in this as well, because she wouldn't be Rachel if she couldn't sing. I hated Kurt's attitude a little in this, despite my epic love for him, but I honestly can not wait for more!