[drabble] Twelve hours ago, and twelve love later

Nov 08, 2008 23:24

Title: Twelve hours ago, and twelve love later
Author: konnistique
Length: 12 x <500 (Total approx. 3 464)
Pairing: Yunjae/Jaeho | i broke yoosu
Rating: PG
Summary: Jaejoong and Yunho.... falling in love, over and over, twelve times.
Genre: AU-ish, angst, drama, romance, fluff... more of the latter ;;
Notes: Drabbles! Twelve of them. Written for
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author: connie, length: drabbles, genre: angst, pairing: yunjaeho, fandom: dbsk, genre: alternate-universe, genre: fluff

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blinkable November 9 2008, 13:26:01 UTC
homaigah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You posted it at detox and did not save me a spot! *pouts* make it a BIG one! ♥

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konnistique November 9 2008, 13:31:24 UTC
:O I'm so sorrrrrrrrrry~ 미안해~ 미안해~ D: I shall make this

big and sparkly so people know how awesome you are ♥

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blinkable November 9 2008, 17:33:38 UTC
Yeap I still love iv the best and my fave line is still from ix: plus, the fun part of living is being able to take tomorrow into your hands and mould it into a shape of happiness by the end of the day.

But I realised I love iii as well because salesman!Jae is so much ♥ And I kinda skipped the angsty ones as in I just skimmed coz I try to stay away from those types XD

화이팅!!!

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konnistique November 10 2008, 08:00:09 UTC
Asd;slkdlksdfs;ldkf !!! But angst is real! D: Call me macho, but love isn't love without pain to me lol ♥ But of course, ignorance is bliss sometimes~

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tashyahero November 9 2008, 14:05:12 UTC
Sp0t! N0t in the m0od yet!! X3

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konnistique November 9 2008, 14:14:59 UTC
Haha you saved a spot even when you're not in the mood! ♥ Ty, I shall wait for you~

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tashyahero November 10 2008, 04:49:20 UTC
Haha..i need to..don't want to the last to c0mment ;p..*current yunjae m0od=high* all of them were beautiful honey x3..but i must say i like n0 3+5+7 the m0st.."this be better n0t being billed under my name"..l0l "well why dont u explain to me just h0w delici0us wet kisses are" hahaha..i like this site of jae...*get bricked*

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konnistique November 10 2008, 07:58:45 UTC
Aw, even if you commented last, I'd still reply ♥

Another taker for iii, v and vii it seems :D Ahaha all you people are such fluff!lovers ♥ Ty for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it~

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moon1084 November 9 2008, 14:15:44 UTC
You try to focus on the taste of want and the feel of skin under your touch that is distinctively Yunho, because then, you might be able to ignore and push to the back of your mind, the glaring fact that you can’t feel the spark in his kisses.

this one kinda broke my heart. aiish my period must be starting. lol they were all love

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konnistique November 9 2008, 15:21:54 UTC
Aw thank you ♥ 8D

Actually, it kinda broke my heart too. But if it was to have a fluffy end then the whole drabble will be just.. mindless fluff. And then it would have lost its appealing factor XD I wanted to finish it off with a 'bang', hence the angst :D

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moon1084 November 9 2008, 15:24:09 UTC
it was just sad to think that they wont feel like that anymore

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chaosmyth November 9 2008, 22:04:24 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!! :D

I really enjoyed these drabbles x33 And actually, most of the time I was left craving for more D:
And I'm not sure I can't pick just one favourite XD

i) This one is so gorgeous ♥ you really managed to capture the way Jae shines with every word you used and just... perfect *_*

iv) I love the playful, carefree feel of this one X3 Them sneaking away from recording to just enjoy themselves and their life, even if for just a second, is so... agdfsdgasfgasdghs D:♥ I can so imagine them wanting to do that.

v) OMFG THIS ONE *___* I'd die for a sequel, seriously XD I adore Jae's attitude to bits, he's so fierce ♥
For a minute, Jaejoong thought Yunho was going to kiss him, but then he realized he was only toying with him. He narrowed his eyes. Well, two can play this game. He grabbed Yunho by the collar and threw him against the wall, slamming a hand beside his head, “Well, why don’t you explain to me just how delicious Wet Kisses are.”MOARRR. Even if it's just them being snarky at each other for the rest of the evening XD ( ... )

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konnistique November 10 2008, 01:39:56 UTC
I... ad;slkaslkdkasld; I love your comment. For real ♥ It just made writing this so much more worthwhile *~*

i) It was exactly what I was trying to hope for. That Yunho knows Jae doesn't shine, but rather he shines when he wants to.

iv) ♥ yesyesyes. I couldn't help but feel they can't possibly enjoy work all the time ;;

v) Sequel? Haha, I haven't actually thought of that happening. I may need think very hard about it XD Actually, I spent ages just thinking of the right cocktail names to use ;;

xii) Even though I wrote it... this is my favourite too :x Ahem, of course my bias does not show by putting it last ;;

Once again, I thank you so much. Your comment was just a;sldkalskd;lk ♥ *~* I think I feel better about my writing already.

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florentineeggs November 10 2008, 03:14:32 UTC
Ooooh this was lovely ♥ all calm and pretty and paced and nice. It's fluff without being obviously sweet and almost sad but not really GODLDKSFJALSD I WISH I COULD DO THAT 8((

My favourite wasss... ARE 1, 2, 4, 8, 9, 10, 11 (((: I love the mood that they paint~! ♥ ♥

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konnistique November 10 2008, 03:30:19 UTC
Thankyouthankyou ♥ :) The thing about me writing fluff is that I can't, not without cringing at the very least, because it feels very much like butchering their characters. And so, this is my take on fluff :)

Ooh, I see you've picked out most of the descriptive pieces ♥ :D Ty~

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florentineeggs November 10 2008, 09:19:10 UTC
It's an excellent one :DD I wish more fluff was written this way~ it's sweet, but at the same time, it's also REALISTIC. Which is like. rare beyond all comprehension. So kudos to you! ♥

Oh, really? :')) ROFL I DIDN'T NOTICE;;; I guess I tend to like a particular type of writing :'D

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