[fic] ygo; kaiba/jounouchi -- the autumn & winter of my life

[konnistique]

Title: The winter of my life (and somehow I've left you behind)
Author: konnistique
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh DM
Pairing: Kaiba/Jounouchi
Length: One-shot; 717w
Genre: Angst/Drama
Summary: Jounouchi dies (again), but this time in Kaiba's arms. And there's something terribly wrong with that scene.
Disclaimer: Don't own 'cept the plot. Prompt from October 6

Comments

[lavenie_2619]

o____o
honestly, I never watch Yu-Gi-Oh so I don't know how Kaiba and Jounouchi looks like *pouts* I'm going to look for them :3 lol!
overall xD I love your writing~ easy for me to imagine when I'm reading it ^^
two thumbs up from me (^o^)V

[konnistique]

I love you so much, Dee :) You're always so supportive of my writing ♥ I hope you'll write again one day!

[lavenie_2619]

Because your writing is so cute!
D: ... not cute but urmph! you know.. aish, I don't know how to describe it >..<
/head desk
lol! I'm sure I'll write again (: thanks Connie x3

[konnistique]

Haha, I wouldn't call it cute either. Some have called it poetic and poignant though.
(Honestly, Kaiba and Jounouchi remind me of Sasuke and Naruto. In a modern sort of way)
♥!

[animom]

Quite lovely - delicate and emotional.

And the part that pulled the thread on my tears, within the context of reading this? The Merwin quote.

(Kaiba and Jou remind me of Iason and Riki.)

[konnistique]

Thank you for reading, and the lovely comment :) I found that quote kind of fitting for the scene and the emotional build-ups too ♥

(Never thought of that, but that's a good comparison too!)

[thewrathofpooky]

i love your style of writing. The characters were wonderfully in character despite the circumstance and the writing was beautiful :)

[konnistique]

Aw thank you so much! I'm really glad you think they were IC because I've never really written them before :) Thank you for the lovely words, they made my day! ♥

[blondewolf2]

poor Joey.... his end comes to a emotional death in his lovers arms...tat would of been sad in ta show.

T_T

I LOVE UR story!!!! and how u start from end, beginning and going around, makes the story more interesting and makes u think about the story more!

[konnistique]

I definitely like the scene myself :) It's more harder to write than I thought though. Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

But here's a question for you: are you very sure Joey 'died'? :) (The ending is just too open for a definite conclusion to be made, so either way is acceptable to think!)

[__katreusaki]

That was powerful. Went right through my chest. I liked that. I liked it a lot.

[konnistique]

I'm really happy you think so! I think it's a 'hit-or-miss' with most people, but then there are wonderful people like you ♥ Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it! :)