[fic] jaeho; 90 days into our future (and what do you see?)

[konnistique]

90 Days into our future

i.March signals the start of a chaotic schedule for Dong Bang Shin Ki that year

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[konnistique]

For: hell_angel_v2, whose beauty, brilliance and love shines ever so gorgeously.
I'm sorry bb, for any and every flaw in this piece :( I tried though! I hope you like it, if not just a little bit :) I wish you all the best-- for today, for tomorrow, for next month, forever ♥ ilusm. Not enough love? :)

[hell_angel_v2]

BRB CRYINGGGGGGGGGGG!

Yunho pauses and tastes the beauty of innocence on the tip of his tongue he doesn't know how to voice.

how can you call THIS trash?? seriouslyyy~~~~ open your eyes and you'll see it's not. >:-/

And it's only the colour of light blush that rains from the sky in small torrents of feather-like touches that skim across his skin.

and i have old you this before, your imagery is 'asls;ld. unexplainable. you write it like you were there when it happened, and i swear I would have been there and watched the scene unfold~~~

yunho, it took him a while but i guess that's what jaejoong is there for? to help him along until he finally sees. 'a;lsa bb this is so mellowly(?) sweet and the entire time i was waiting for yunho to give jae the right answer. HOW CAN YOU CALL THIS CRAP. IT'S PERFECT. said totally unbiased i swear.

did you cross post this. you should but if you haven't then i demand you to!! you've made me so incoherent idek/idec if i saw mistakes or w/e. IT'S PERFECT.

[konnistique]

CRIES WITH, FOREVER ;~~~;

It's not that greeeeeeeat. Butbutbut, thank you so much bb. It's all for you okay? That's why I said I was stuck lol, the words wouldn't come when I tried to put myself into the scene :(

Ah Yunho, idek :X Love can do that to you, LOL HAPPY YUNJAE BIRTHDAY, GIAN BB. ^-^ I'm so glad you ended up liking it! :) CONNIE HASN'T FAILED YET. YAY. will cross-post soon! ♥

[hell_angel_v2]

you've robbed me of my manners. i forgot to say thank you.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and ilu, bb. more than i can ever express.

[u_knowiloveyou]

CONNIE MY SWEET :♥hugs;

because i want to be second but i dont have that little useful editing function

[u_knowiloveyou]

now this;

you already know so well how i feel about your writings C: your words paint all sorts of rainbows and clouds and subtle sweet it makes you think deep (and i mean it; i love the way a simple description becomes such a work of art in your hands♥)

gosh; am i even making sense? (on to the randombles)

abuijaja;pabogateunfish :: reading this made me feel like i was floating; but never too far from where your words were taking me. mmfmph this was so fairytale-like without even being fairytale-ish. you steal my breath ;=; (what ewness? the only thing ew is me going sappy over ewyouu xd)

then again; i miss sugaring over my dearie conniepooh *shivers work really has messed my brain :X (ilu)sion♥

edited at 2009-07-05 09:40pm

[konnistique]

You say that after everyone and their mothers know how beautiful you write :( But see why I don't like to write? WE ALWAYS THROW SUGARY HEARTS AT EACH OTHER >D And I always run out of words to melt you with :( ♥

...but I still love you so much, so there >|

(and wthlol why so cute for Sheryl? the editing lineeeee. alskdj SQUISHES. you forgot to italicize it though >D)

[u_knowiloveyou]

nononono darling, please write foreverever; even if it means i'll have to throw sugary hearts at you for an eternity~ i have ever-lasting strength when it comes to youuu♥(:

(i only realised after staring at it muahah! the future me shall learn from my past mistakes >d but till then, people will know my edition was a fake :B)

[moonkissedx]

my spot ♥

[moonkissedx]

;_______; this was so beautiful. your words are pure amazingness and the way you describe their surroundings, the way you describe how jaejoong asks yunho, "what do you see?" at every different time he questions. your imagery is awesome, homg, just awesome. I was waiting for yunho to finally get the correct answer to jae's question, and the way you wrote it was just... beautiful. this piece was absolutely wonderful, the way you brought out the love. you're greaaaat! :D♥

[konnistique]

:O wow i don't even know if your comment was exaggerated or not, but the words hit home to heart just as much ♥! Thank you sosososo entirely much for reading and dropping by such a beautiful comment--nothing short of amazingness in itself :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[lovelykitten8]

makes me cheek hurt fro smiling lol

[konnistique]

aw, well if it helps, your comment made me smile too! :D Thank you so much for taking the time to comment ♥ /squish

[dilovesyunjae]

aigoo...this is nice...but if you ask me what do i see...i can only see YunJae..sigh..

[konnistique]

I was hoping everyone will only see yunjae in the end :D Thank you so much for reading and leaving me a comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^-^/ ♥