[fic] Naruto; Naruto-centric - 36 Alternatives (the best of)

[konnistique]

Title: 36 Alternatives (the best of)
Author: konnistique
Pairing: Naruto-centric, Naruto/Sasuke
Length: One-shot, ~600w.
Genre: General/Angst
Summary: Naruto falls, Sasuke tells him to stop, Sai doesn't. Naruto falls, Sai saves him, Sasuke doesn't.
Disclaimer: Don't own any of the characters, nor Yellowcard's 'Fighting', nor the image or proverb (

Comments

[lavenie_2619]

Wee~ I love Sasuke and Naruto XP and this fic... ah.. ehem, I need to focus one by one to get the feeling >...

[konnistique]

Aw Dee, you watch Naruto too? :D This is news to me! alsdkj♥ Thank you for reading, and I'm sorry the imagery is too vague and figurative XD I tend to write like this~

[lavenie_2619]

Yup, yupp! ^^ and I love Sasuke ♥♥♥ He's just so cute~ (of course Naruto and Shikamaru too! ^^)

Aha no worries, I get that ^^;;;

[konnistique]

And I managed to keep to my word-- of posting one fic a month ^-^ I feel rather accomplished if I do say so myself (: (Hope your writing has been progressing well~)

[gonrie]

That was pretty good. I liked it

[konnistique]

Aw that's very kind of you! I was beginning to think it was a bit too deep ;; Thank you so so much for reading and commenting (: ♥

[konnistique]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! (: Ikr, Naruto can balance both angst and happiness in a way that won't seem too ooc ;;

[ylmik_wisty]

I like the theme very much. Naruto is a pretty amazing character. I like the order you wrote it in, with Naruto falling and then he's "okay" and smiles, but then it goes to the description of a jagged ground (ouch!imagery) and how he's still drawn to that. Not exactly chilling, but it leaves you at Naruto's different motivations (like Saasuke~!) and his behavior in the face of all that. Er. My interp anyway. XD'
Nice piece!

[konnistique]

Ohmygod, I think I love you so much right now :D I was seriously beginning to think no one understands what I'm trying to express (without spelling it right in their faces!) and then along comes you! ♥

That's exactly the interpretation I'm trying to bring across-- that Naruto is falling, is trying to find even ground between Sasuke and him, but is still okay despite everything that happens because Sakura and Sai doesn't give up on him and he knows that. Plus, everyone is allowed 5 minutes of their lives not trying to be the hero(ine) ^-^/

alsjkdkl♥ your comment has made my day. Thank you so so so much!

[ylmik_wisty]

I'm glad you enjoyed my comment!! It's my pleasure to give back a little enjoyment the same way I get some by reading the fic. :) You're welcome.

[bean_chan]

This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it!

[konnistique]

I'm truly glad you think so! :) Another comment which made my day♥ Thank you so much for dropping by!