Comments | edenfalling: [Fic] "Ashes" part 12 -- original, NaNo 2010

edenfalling

[Fic] "Ashes" part 12 -- original, NaNo 2010

Nov 18, 2010 03:53

nanowrimo, original story, nano 2010, writing, -ashes, fic

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iponly November 18 2010, 22:43:19 UTC

I like the other end of chapter 1 better. Readers all knew it was coming- it happens- and then at the start of chapter two we get to be curious again.

edenfalling November 19 2010, 05:04:15 UTC

Duly noted!