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rianax November 10 2010, 20:30:12 UTC
Morgalen is very sharp; I hope she does not cut her self.

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edenfalling November 11 2010, 03:22:59 UTC
Morgalen has issues -- some justified, some not so much -- which will hopefully become more apparent as I keep writing.

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rianax November 11 2010, 06:51:59 UTC
Given that she is or was high nobility, issues are a standard packet. Politics are treacherous enough, but add blood to the mix... sharks would be kinder.

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slowmercury November 11 2010, 01:43:57 UTC
Huh. I guess Morgalen doesn't like being interrupted, although it seems like Riam just let it slide of his back. And did Riam just let Morgalen know that Sular is the other binder? I thought his sister told him not to.

Enjoy your book!

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edenfalling November 11 2010, 03:21:24 UTC
And did Riam just let Morgalen know that Sular is the other binder? I thought his sister told him not to.

*checks running story file* Oops, you know, he did just let the cat out of the bag! That's the sort of thing I would usually catch while editing a rough draft to a second draft, which, clearly, I am not doing during NaNo. Oh well. I suppose it will have to become a character point -- it seems that Riam is not so good with the whole power game and diplomacy thing, and is bad at keeping any secrets other than two Very Important ones that I've been hinting around.

I guess Morgalen doesn't like being interrupted, although it seems like Riam just let it slide off his back.

Morgalen is prickly. Riam, not so much. There's a reason I keep comparing him to an overgrown puppy. :-)

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