[Fic] "The Transient and the Eternal: Babies" -- Angel Sanctuary

[edenfalling]

I'm doing thirtyforthree again, this time for Kira Sakuya/Mudo Setsuna/Mudo Sara from Kaori Yuki's Angel Sanctuary. There will be spoilers in nearly every theme -- given the characters, it's nearly impossible to avoid them! -- and a lot of potentially objectionable content. This is because the source manga has a lot of potentially objectionable content. If

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[askerian]

love! themes were yay and not-kato was yay and i would say intelligent stuff but i'm about to miss my bus, see what your fics make me do XD anyway. this fits the theme pretty well imho.

[edenfalling]

Thanks! Takahiro, and Takahiro being Kato's reincarnation, came rather out of the blue -- my original plan for this prompt was to have Setsuna and Sara watching a group of their neighbors' children and having to comically explain away Lucifer's sudden and impossible appearance in the middle of their kitchen or something -- but I am rather fond of the little brat. His life does improve, incidentally, and Sara and Setsuna are still in touch with him and his own children a couple decades later on.

I hope you caught your bus. :-)

[uminohikari]

♥ That was really awesome. I love Takahiro's characterization.

[edenfalling]

Thank you! Takahiro was an interesting character to write, mostly because I didn't create him on purpose -- he just kind of happened, and then I had to figure out what to do with him.

[anonymous]

This my favourite snippet of The Transient and the Eternal. I like how you blend Lucifer's and Kira's personality together....I'd love to know what happened with Okazaki though XD

[edenfalling]

Thank you! I confess that I blend Lucifer and Kira largely because I find Kira absurdly easy to write, so the closer the two are, the easier it is to write Lucifer as well. *wry*

As for Okazaki, his accidental reunion with Setsuna, Sara, and Lucifer is what kicks off the plot of "The Transient and the Eternal: Listening," otherwise known as the story wherein the Tokyo police try to arrest Lucifer for Kato's murder and hijinks ensue. I have had to scrap three partial rough drafts of that fic for various reasons, but I have every intention of defeating it one day. It will not remain a Noodle Incident forever! (Warning: link goes to TVTropes. Click at your own risk. *grin*)