[Fic] "Lemonade" chapter 14 -- BtVS/Gundam Wing/Naruto

[edenfalling]

Here is chapter 14 of "Lemonade." I think it stinks like a stinking thing, but unfortunately the sensible story flow transition -- having the storm arrive at the start of Sasuke's POV section -- would put the chapter break in a weird place, so I'm left with a sense of filler. *sigh

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[yuki_buffy]

wii!!! new Lemonade! It was a little fillerish...b ut i'm left feeling quite expectant for the next chapter.

[edenfalling]

The next chapter will contain some dialogue and character stuff that I've been trying to get to for a while... and maybe some fanservice, if I can fit it in. :-)

[askerian]

"Always try to look on the bright side," she told herself. "If nothing else, you can laugh yourself sick over the lack of realism."

LMAO. Oh, Faith.

I like her overview of his relationship with Robin and how things are at the moment, actually. And I don't mind a slower-paced chapter from time to time. ^^ (but next time I hope there's some action. XD)

Also, Faith is meeeeeean to poor emotionally-stunted Sasuke. Good job, Faith. u.u-b

[edenfalling]

Next chapter is, sadly, not an action chapter. It's mostly three people sitting in a small room talking about stuff. But! They actually all three talk, in the same conversation! (Which hasn't happened for a few chapters -- I keep getting only one or two people per POV section, for some reason.)

Chapter 16, though... ah, I have plans for chapter 16. And for chapter 17 (and possibly ch. 18 as well, depending on how things stretch or contract on the page).

(Well, I think I have plans. This story delights in changing directions on me without bothering to give any advance notice. *sigh*)

[lukita]

If I can pick up your Faith and squish her I would, but hey... we're getting that snowstorm. :D

[edenfalling]

Faith is <3