I just sat down and read this whole story and the only thoughts I had were wow. This is such a nice, complex, well written story. Thank you for sharing it.
The complexity was this close to driving me insane at several points -- I really am much more comfortable writing straight narrative from a single POV and 'voice' -- but I think it's important to stretch as a writer, and this story really wanted to be written. (Or, more accurately, it touches on a lot of my borderline obsessions, and so it kept nagging at the back of my mind even when I despaired over it.)
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I'm really glad you liked it.
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