P3: And Walk Away

Mar 24, 2009 01:21

Fandom: Persona 3 FES
Main characters: Akihiko, Mitsuru
Referenced characters: N/a
Pairing: Akihiko/Mitsuru
Contains: Gunplay, references to sexual situations
Rating: R
Summary: He never touches her, and she never really touches him.

And Walk Away )

akihiko/mitsuru, gunplay, mitsuru, shortfic, akihiko, sex

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animegirl07 March 24 2009, 03:58:30 UTC
Uhn. That's very hot. (Or cold, perhaps. ^^)

I love the way that you capture a moment, or a series of moments, and the way you convey both what is happening and what the characters are thinking. It's beautiful, and I get really excited when I see that you've put up more fic. Thank you for being awesome. ^^

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edenbound March 24 2009, 09:31:41 UTC
Aww, thank you!

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lassarina March 24 2009, 23:47:53 UTC
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THAT IS ALL I HAVE WORDS FOR.

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edenbound March 24 2009, 23:49:09 UTC
It didn't come out quite the way I was visualising it, so I might have to have another attempt sometime soon...

But I take it you liked this? Hee.

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threewalls April 2 2009, 22:49:46 UTC
This seems very apt for them, the intimacy despite the lack of touching, the lack of direct communication, the almost wistful ending touch.

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