FFXII: Agony

[edenbound]

Fandom: Final Fantasy XII
Pairing: None
Warnings: Angst
Rating: G
Summary: Fran had thought Humes too transient for true grief. For the_sandsea.

Comments

[mereprototype]

Aww, now I'm wondering who died.

[irish_ais]

That's gorgeous--the wording is very elegant, very Fran.

[muggy_mountain]

Hmm...I don't usually read FFXII fic, but the summary intrigued me in its uniquely un-Hume viewpoint. It's a touching piece, of course, but I like the consideration you've given to the Vieran here; their thoughts on Humes allow such a tidy cultural and personal development for Fran (and Balthier).

Bravo.

Also, small bit of a whine: the colors on this layout make the blinky cursor really difficult to see when typing comments and thus it's difficult to go back and make a change without using the mouse.

[edenbound]

Thank you. ♥

Hm, because I reply to comments through my email, I'd never noticed. This is one of the LJ presets, so in theory it should be fine... D: Thanks for telling me, I'll try tweaking it a bit. xD

[threewalls]

An interesting contrast between her views of humes as a species and in the particular. (I'm guessing this is vaguely post-Pharos, but the unexplained why of his grief isn't necessary to appreciate her reaction to it.)