I laughed, I wibbled, I was reduced to a puddle of goooooooo. Man, I enjoy the way you write Baralai and Gippal, like, a lot. And Nooj. Because what is fic without Nooj? :D
This was really nice. It's been a long time since I've read some porn like this. ;) An often-used situation, but it was well-handled. I especially liked the little aside when Gippal was thinking about the old cliche of people drowning in each other.
I'm glad you thought it was well handled. Mostly, when I wrote it, I just needed something I could get a lot of word count from, and this was what irish_ais suggested. xD
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mmmmm porn.
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Porn is fun. :3
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I should write more of them, I know. xD
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I'm glad you thought it was well handled. Mostly, when I wrote it, I just needed something I could get a lot of word count from, and this was what irish_ais suggested. xD
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