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WIP: Echoes, Chapter 23

Jan 31, 2011 22:02

Title: Echoes
Author: EcstaticDance
Summary: All of this has happened before, now we're going to see it happen again. But the Lords of Kobol want to see if they can possibly change it, so key characters have retained the echoes of memories which cause them to make different decisions, or experience things at different times, than in previous cycles.
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Comments 6

kdbleu February 2 2011, 01:33:14 UTC

I'm really excited for your take on S4. Not to pressure you or anything, but you haven't done me wrong yet.

The bit with Kara and Pea was sweet without being too much.

And I loved this description: They jumped, and Kara felt a piece of her soul being torn away from her. Such a great explanation of Kara and her connection to finding Earth.

ecstaticdance February 2 2011, 04:38:54 UTC

You're sweet.

I'm glad the scene with Kara and Pea worked for you, and that you liked that spin on Kara's reaction to "going the wrong waaaayyyy!!!" It's a pretty deep need for her.

koolaidmom11 February 2 2011, 13:00:16 UTC

Well, I didn't realize a new chapter was up and then I rushed to read it. I'm so glad that Kara was reunited with Lee although I have mixed feelings on her going away without him. I realize that he also has a destiny but they also have a family..she hasn't been around Pea for a long time at this point. I can't wait until she meets the colons although I'm curious if she will be as crazy as the show, she seems calmer.

Thanks for posting. I always enjoy this story.

ecstaticdance February 2 2011, 17:57:59 UTC

I realize that he also has a destiny but they also have a family..she hasn't been around Pea for a long time at this point.

And Kara is Kara. If there's one thing she's good at, aside from being badass, it's putting up walls. She's not 100% undamaged, even if she is calmer and a bit more sure of herself and what she needs to do.

solarisday February 10 2011, 16:02:54 UTC

Excellent chapter. I was tense the whole way through. Oh, Kara. I hope she remembers that she has two somebodies she has to live for. I'm very much afraid of your take on the finale...

ecstaticdance February 10 2011, 16:15:12 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

Poor Kara, indeed. But there are answers coming, I promise. And more divergence from canon.