Comments | eclats_de_voix: mukuro/chrome one-shot [part 2]

eclats_de_voix

mukuro/chrome one-shot [part 2]

Mar 16, 2011 15:20

( PART 2 )

fandom: khr!, pairing: mukuro/chrome, challenge: 30 whirlwind romances, character: mukuro, character: chrome

Comments 13

mychemical_lust March 16 2011, 20:41:46 UTC

You and Yukki have rekindled the love I have for this pairing! This story was so lovely! ♥ And creative! I love it! C:

eclats_de_voix March 16 2011, 20:58:18 UTC

Thank you!! She gave me the basic plot for this about a year ago, and it was fun to write something that sounds like a fairy tale. (I changed the ending on her. haha. It was orginally going to end with Chrome seeing a guy with blue hair in a crowd, and she would run after him.) Thank you, I'm you you enjoyed it. MUKURO/CHROME IS BOSS!!! It, like, the only real canon pairing beyond Tsuna/Kyoko and Colo/Lal

gauchecaesium March 17 2011, 06:04:18 UTC

Miss Shera, I love this. You do not write like many others do for fanfiction, which is a good thing.

Is it just me, or is there a Gothic motif in this story?

Keep this running until the end. I will be reading everu bit.

eclats_de_voix March 17 2011, 18:00:40 UTC

I don't know, everything can be taken for gothic now-adays. Anything that is romantic, ie, inspires emotion, is technically gothic if you go by the old definition.

I was actually going to end it here, but you think it wouldbe cool to have another part? I wasn't even planning on it, but that might be cool. It might take a while,, but I'll design another story for the tyl, with spade and mukuro together.

I need a Mukuro icon to match yours. gauchecaesium March 18 2011, 04:00:43 UTC

The last passage does not seem like a final wrap-up, though. Either way, I will be looking forward to a pseudo-sequel.

rinhail March 17 2011, 09:16:46 UTC

Okay okay, you win! I'm totally falling for the Mukuro/Chrome pairing.

eclats_de_voix March 17 2011, 18:02:11 UTC

yyyyyaaaaaay! AND I must go read your own interpretation of the pairing :] This one seriously still needs to be fixed up. I CATCH SO MANY GRAMMAR ERRORS! Why does no one tell me this?

rinhail March 18 2011, 23:26:54 UTC

Mine aren't finished yet, got to do a little editing here and there, but when they're done I hope you enjoy them. (:

Probably because people are afraid to point out mistakes. I don't think they need to be in your case because you're so nice.

eclats_de_voix March 19 2011, 19:50:02 UTC

ahhh~ I still get embarrassed when I read through and a singular instead of a plural, or hte instead of the. Perfect. It must be perfect! ahaha. I'm looking forward. I know how hard it is to sniff out those errors.

vampireegyptian March 19 2011, 07:02:30 UTC

I'm fangirling this so hard right now. It's amazing and I bow before your magnificent wordsmithing.

(Seducing young ladies with horses, Hibari? My, my. x3)

eclats_de_voix March 19 2011, 21:50:48 UTC

You write too, haha. Hey if you like that concept, why don't you write a story in this type of universe? Its kind of like Jane Austen, victorian, kind of story. It would be neat, and I would totally read it, whether you pair him with an OC or a canon.

fangirl double cheek kiss*

Its nice hearing from you!

vampireegyptian March 20 2011, 07:16:33 UTC

But my writing is clearly inferior. And I may have started one now, thanks to your inspiration, but it's LamboxI-Pin in turn of the century New York. And involves opium dens and dragon tattoos and succubi and stuff.

I'm trying to write less about Hibari, but my heart cries out in pain when I do...

eclats_de_voix March 21 2011, 01:15:59 UTC

ahhhh! That sounds like a great idea! I can't wait to read. Its so DIFFERENT.