Fic: Five Symptoms John Sheppard Isn't Used to Having

[eccentricweft]

This was inspired, oddly, by spuffyduds' hilarious Five Planets Atlantis is Never Contacting Again, or at Least If They Do, They're Sending Another Damn Team, Not John's. (Go read it!)

I don't have the gift of writing humor (this is h/c instead) but the other thing I admired about Five Planets... was that there was a story arc in the progression of the five

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[klinoa]

Oh, just oh! *Clutches heart*

[eccentricweft]

I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[eccentricweft]

Isn't it great when there's a new little McShep story to give you happy dreams? :)

I'm glad it held up for a second reading! (It took so long for the ending to work itself loose, I've got the first three parts just about committed to memory.)

[cathalin]

Oh! Oh, I love this! The whole thing is very powerful, not only because of its structure, but because it's so visceral somehow. I found myself holding my breath at the "hey buddy" section, where John realizes he's not going to do his casual act and is going to be honest; I felt overwhelmed with him. And him saying that he was so afraid, oh my heart, that was really beautiful.

[eccentricweft]

Oh Cath! I'm so glad you liked it!

[lilyleia78]

::blubbers incoherently::

::whimpers::

♥ ♥ ♥

[eccentricweft]

:: pets you :: It's okay, they're together now!

I'm so glad you liked it!

[almostnever]

Lovely. :-)

[eccentricweft]

Thank you!