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ebonymist

Fic: Relatives

Jan 22, 2007 17:15

So I'm sitting around trying to work on Chapter 16 of Invisible (and trust me, it's not being nice. I know where I want to go with it, it's just a matter of working up the motivation to get it there), when I realize that I need to take a break from writing it for right now. I'll work on it, maybe after CSI: Miami tonight, or I'll work on it ( Read more... )

subj: pair: eric/ryan, rating: pg, fic: csi: miami

Comments 6

persikay January 23 2007, 13:54:24 UTC

Awwwww! That was lovely. Poor Ryan freaking out, but Eric had just the idea how to stop that by kissing him *g*
And the last line made me go awwww again.

ebonymist January 23 2007, 16:07:25 UTC

Thanks! ;) I thought about adding a scene in there with Horatio/Marisol, but I decided to go easy on poor Ryan. He's already freaking out about meeting Eric's family, he doesn't need to worry about doing it in front of his boss, too, lol.

I liked the last line, too. I thought it was a good way to leave it off. :D And it made me go awwww, too and I'm the one who wrote it, lol.

persikay January 24 2007, 14:29:45 UTC

Oh god, poor Ryan. Yes, it's definitely better that Horatio wasn't there. Come to think of it... has Horatio met the parents yet? *g* Wouldn't it be fun if Marisol took H to meet her family, and Ryan was already there as part of the family? Let Horatio be the nervous one for once! Hehehe.

ebonymist January 24 2007, 15:37:53 UTC

*headdesk* Great, now the bunnies want me to write a sequel along those lines! LOL, there are so many ideas flowing right now that I may have to write a couple sequels. *eg*

alligator138 January 24 2007, 07:53:33 UTC

I love the idea of Eric's mother telling Ryan all the embarrassing baby stories. Awwww!

ebonymist January 24 2007, 14:15:58 UTC

I know what you mean! And you know, Ryan's probably storing all those away in the back of his mind for the next time he needs "blackmail" material. *eg* ;D