Just the two of us...

Aug 03, 2011 18:56

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: Becker / Matt / Matthew
Rating: R-15
Word Count: 5,882
Summary: An encounter with an anomaly has an unexpected effect on Matt.

Just the two of us )

fiction: slash, fiction: threesome, tv: primeval, matt anderson / hilary becker

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samueljames August 3 2011, 18:47:34 UTC
I really enjoyed this. The initial split reminded me of Xander being split in Buffy but I liked how the three men made their relationship work. The different personalities really made Matt and Matthew separate characters. I'm glad the anomaly was able to rejoin them though to prevent Matt dying.

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ebonyfeather August 3 2011, 19:02:53 UTC
That Buffy episide is what started this fic!

I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for reading.

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samueljames August 3 2011, 19:33:37 UTC
The fact that they were separate for quite a while made me care about them individually. I really liked Matthew's adorable shyness.

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basched August 3 2011, 19:14:54 UTC

WHOO! A nice long awesome, funny and very sexy Mecker fic! WHOO!

I love the idea of this! Two Matts! Okay the trekkie in me immediately thought of the Kirk quote but only for primeval!

"Shoot us both Becker!" HEEE!

But seriously, the threesome smut was quite there! Also, Lester was fantastic! His line about putting Becker on sentry duty made me crack up!

I liked reading this. Great stuff!

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ebonyfeather August 3 2011, 21:20:31 UTC
Thank you! (Love the Star Trek reference)

I had to give them both to Becker to play with for a little while at least- the mental image was just too tempting!

Glad you liked this.

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fredbassett August 3 2011, 19:50:08 UTC
I was all hot and bothered from the felching scene and then you nearly went and broke my little doggy heart!

I was terrified there was going to be an unhappy ending and I galloped through the rest at breakneck speed! *pants loudly*

I shall now have to re-read. Oh, the hardship. *g*

Great fic. I loved poor, uncertain Matthew. And Lester was a star.

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ebonyfeather August 3 2011, 21:23:49 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it. Finally got it posted!

The poor boys almost got an unhappy ending but I liked them and didn't want to do anything nasty to either of them.

As for Lester, I like to think that under all that snark, he has a soft spot for all the team.

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lukadreaming August 3 2011, 22:25:01 UTC
Fab idea! Angst and hawtness and a happy ending (you had me worried for a moment!)

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ebonyfeather August 5 2011, 22:38:32 UTC
Thank you!

They deserved a happy ending.

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kristen_mara August 4 2011, 00:44:47 UTC

Coolness! Becker ordering them to both sit in the back (inviting a round of 'he shoved me'/'he poked me'), Matt arguing with himself, Lester playing Cupid (a kinky Cupid), the relationship between the three - jolly good fun and I'm glad that the Matthew side then came out in Matt.

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ebonyfeather August 5 2011, 22:42:48 UTC
LOL at 'Lester as a kinky cupid'. It was fun to have Matt arguing with himself, and Becker having to deal with them both.

Thanks for reading- glad you liked it.

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