A BIT OF CONCRIT ON THE BODY. PLZ IGNORE IF YOU DON'T WANT. D: First off, the face and coloring so far is AMAZING. His left (our right) arm is abit off. The shoulder is a tad too far over looking from the way you drew the seam, kinda looks like he's half hunching. I think all you need to do to fix it is to raise the seam line and extend the elbow just a SMIDGE. his forearm is kind of off, but I took it to paint to try and explain what I meant. I forgot to outline the chest on his right, but it should stick out a tad more so that he's got a bit better chest build. (rib-wise) When someone hunches, their chest doesn't pull in as much as the stomach.
welcoooome. Most of that advice I learned from stalking tutorials. There's a few on my favorites list on DA -- I'm watchin' ya now, so you can look for them. I need to draw batslash. ): LOLOL IGNORE MY CRAPPY ART. its at a vaaaaaaaryyy awkward stage right now. ):
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First off, the face and coloring so far is AMAZING.
His left (our right) arm is abit off. The shoulder is a tad too far over looking from the way you drew the seam, kinda looks like he's half hunching. I think all you need to do to fix it is to raise the seam line and extend the elbow just a SMIDGE. his forearm is kind of off, but I took it to paint to try and explain what I meant. I forgot to outline the chest on his right, but it should stick out a tad more so that he's got a bit better chest build. (rib-wise) When someone hunches, their chest doesn't pull in as much as the stomach.
http://i40.tinypic.com/2chnb7k.jpg
yeah. I'm probably not the best person to help with this, but I figured I could make an attempt. ):
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Unfortunately I already finished it, but I'll definitely remember your tips for next time XD
Thanks again <3
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I need to draw batslash. ):
LOLOL IGNORE MY CRAPPY ART.
its at a vaaaaaaaryyy awkward stage right now. ):
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