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Dog-sitting (A weird oneshot)

Dec 01, 2012 15:41

Title: Dog-sitting
Author: madnessoverdoseWord count: 2978, let's just round it up to 3000 ( Read more... )

Comments 25

maotsujun_rabu December 1 2012, 13:12:35 UTC

i love this. i so love this! i have a permanently plastered smile on my face from beginning to end hehe.

we all want this for our dearest maotsujun ne. everything that nino witnessed. its what we also want to see hehe. its refreshing too as its ninos pov... as if its us.

thank you for this. hope there's more. ^^v

madnessoverdose December 2 2012, 14:56:40 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it! I wanted a fresh perspective as well so I capitalized on Jun and Nino's relationship, and Nino is close to Mao as well, so he's a perfect candidate for this story.

Also, you need to update Marrying Highness! I mean, take your time, but we're all looking forward to the next chapter!

mellastella December 1 2012, 15:43:46 UTC

This was really good! I liked the tone of this piece. It was a great slice-of-life fic and i hope to read more from you.

The only thing I would change is your quotation marks; I found it hard to catch some of them because you were using these marks ('...') and not these ("..."). If you were taught to use the ones in the fic, then please disregard this comment. :)

madnessoverdose December 2 2012, 14:57:35 UTC

Oh, I use ('...') simply because it's more convenient on my laptop, but I can see why it will be difficult to read occasionally. Will take note!

itsdarla19 December 1 2012, 16:02:23 UTC

And I just couldn't remove this stupid grin across my face. Haha! The brat and the diva. Plus the pet/daughter/Hug :) this is just awesome!!!! Totally made my night. Thank you for this! :))

madnessoverdose December 2 2012, 15:02:22 UTC

Yeah, Hug is always a huge fixture in my stories, she's super cute!

Thanks for reading!

chic_arashi December 1 2012, 16:56:02 UTC

hey.... this is so awesome..
like everyone else, ive got this HUGE GRIN on my face from beginning to end... <3
this is sooo great i have no words for it!
this feels so real~
Thank you so much for writing this! You made my day!!
Please keep on writing! :)) Thanks again~

madnessoverdose December 2 2012, 15:04:35 UTC

Well, hopefully with the amount of free time on my hands, I'll churn out more fics. Currently I'm working on one that is really not suitable for the underage, haha, hope to get it out soon but smut is incredibly difficult to write!

Thanks for reading :)

r_1_ss_a December 1 2012, 21:07:54 UTC

So lovely! <3

I love the way you showed both relationships! Jun and Mao's, Jun and Nino's.

I love the little snippets of the relationships that you showed!

I enjoyed reading this so much!

Thanks for sharing! :)

madnessoverdose December 2 2012, 15:08:31 UTC

Yeah, the way I portrayed their friendship is how I expect they'll be. Slightly dramatized but I do expect Arashi to have very grown up talks on very random occasions, it seems very 'them'. And I think Jun and Nino have a very delicate/balanced relationship that straddles the line between colleagues and friends very nicely and so they'll have conversations like that, which are not too intrusive but are still very personal.