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[ohsparky]

I joined this community a while back but never posted… but here's my first.

Title: To Swear by the Sharpened Edge
Prompt: War
Rating: PG (nothing much in terms of offensive material - but Poo has heavy thoughts)
Warnings: none
Summary: Prince Poo reflects upon the path of the sword, and why he much prefers painting to promises made in blood.

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Comments

[eiviiaru]

Ooh, very nice. I like it; I think there's interesting material to be gleaned from Poo's opinions on violence, and this was well-written besides. Love the last line.

[ohsparky]

Thanks! Yep, Poo's relationship with martial arts always fascinated me ever since the whole Mu training thing where he has his psychedelic-transcendental dismemberment episode. And yes, that last line pretty much drove the rest of the piece.

[mirwolf]

Love :D Very well written, and there just is NOT enough Poo fanfic out there. I especially love that last line, it made me smile really hard for some reason. Be pleased, you produced an extremely dorky smile on your reader's face ^_~

[ohsparky]

Yay! I love getting inexplicable smiles after reading stuff - it's a fun sensation. So I'm very flattered that someone got it from my writing. Thanks!

And I agree, that last line really makes the piece.

[insanepurin]

Yay, Poofic! *____* I loved his introspection on violence and art. I hadn't thought of Poo being a painter before. "The pen is mightier than the sword", eh?

[ohsparky]

Perhaps that old saying needs to be revised - for Poo, the brush is indeed mightier, no? ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting!