All I can say is wow! You should speak up more in the class, you definitly have something to say...
Highpoints for Question 11: You tackled the hourglass form with ease, and stuck to answering the question, very good. Great application and supportive use from your personal refrences.
Pointers for #11: Not too much to say here; In your last sentence you said, "So, I guess that I am". Try to avoid words like guess in this context; say what you need to say with clearer definition. Something like: "Personally, I am most often faced..." Catch the flow? Hope that helps!
Awesome beginning sentence for answer 10. Can't add anything to that! I like the way you expand on your first sentence, and close with James 4:4.
In the first question, I think you used single quotes when you should've used double ones. ' is used withing other quotes, so I think what you meant to put was ". Near the end, "ether" should be "either", aren't typo's that end up words still so the spell check doesn't get them bothersome!? Good application of the question to your life, but you may want to put "swim practice" or something because "swim" sounds awkward.
Nice job on the second question as well. Have a Happy Christmass, Kwanzaa, and New Year!
I like my icon too!! Ian is still asking what Kwanzaa is...maybe you should come and explain it to him... (He pronounces it as "Kwanzi". I can't quite get him to say it right. Gerrrr)
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Kwanzaa (both: kwan-ze) or Kwanza , secular seven-day festival in celebration of the African heritage of African Americans, beginning on Dec. 26. Developed by Maulana Karenga and first observed in 1966, Kwanzaa is based in part on traditional African harvest festivals but particularly emphasizes the role of the family and community in African-American culture. Each day is dedicated to a particular principle (unity, self-determination, collective work and responsibility, cooperative economics, purpose, creativity, and faith), and on each day one of the candles on a seven-branched candelabrum is lighted. The celebration also includes the giving of gifts and a karamu, or African feast.
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All I can say is wow! You should speak up more in the class, you definitly have something to say...
Highpoints for Question 11: You tackled the hourglass form with ease, and stuck to answering the question, very good. Great application and supportive use from your personal refrences.
Pointers for #11: Not too much to say here; In your last sentence you said, "So, I guess that I am". Try to avoid words like guess in this context; say what you need to say with clearer definition. Something like: "Personally, I am most often faced..." Catch the flow? Hope that helps!
Awesome beginning sentence for answer 10. Can't add anything to that! I like the way you expand on your first sentence, and close with James 4:4.
Keep up the good work!
Matthew H.
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In the first question, I think you used single quotes when you should've used double ones. ' is used withing other quotes, so I think what you meant to put was ". Near the end, "ether" should be "either", aren't typo's that end up words still so the spell check doesn't get them bothersome!? Good application of the question to your life, but you may want to put "swim practice" or something because "swim" sounds awkward.
Nice job on the second question as well. Have a Happy Christmass, Kwanzaa, and New Year!
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Ian is still asking what Kwanzaa is...maybe you should come and explain it to him...
(He pronounces it as "Kwanzi".
I can't quite get him to say it right. Gerrrr)
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It's like talking to a wall. (Only a wall might get it faster...)
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(both: kwan-ze) or Kwanza , secular seven-day festival in celebration of the African heritage of African Americans, beginning on Dec. 26. Developed by Maulana Karenga and first observed in 1966, Kwanzaa is based in part on traditional African harvest festivals but particularly emphasizes the role of the family and community in African-American culture. Each day is dedicated to a particular principle (unity, self-determination, collective work and responsibility, cooperative economics, purpose, creativity, and faith), and on each day one of the candles on a seven-branched candelabrum is lighted. The celebration also includes the giving of gifts and a karamu, or African feast.
Columbia Encyclopedia, Sixth Edition, Copyright
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