Prelim work - plot theme

[easytheregenius]

Because I really can't not write about this guy. It's compulsive. And I have a plot thread I'm trying to ravel. Most of which is written on the back of a library receipt.

Comments

[elaiel]

Nice, very nice.

[easytheregenius]

Thankyou! I'm encouraged that you like it.

[sacredclay]

Love it!!! Great start!

[easytheregenius]

Thankyou :) I'm taking your advice - trying to write something with chapters for a change! We'll see how that works out. At the moment it's pretty disparate.

[sacredclay]

It doesn't matter. Whenever these guys are together, I have to take a cold shower. ANd I really love the way this one started off. Rush is in his world and Young is trying to yank him back. Young is the authoritive figure here, the daddy, but Rush is the rebellious boy. I just love how they clash but also how they work together for the sake of the crew. How will your Rush and Young get to that point, if ever? Will there be a middleman between the two to get them to get along better? Or drive them together? The possibilities is endless here.