Title: It Always Comes Around
Author: empressearwig
Pairing: Nick/Miley
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 9,300 for this part
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own nothing, this is all for fun. This didn’t happen. Etc.
Summary: Two weeks in June.
Author’s Notes: I was going to finish this before I started posting, but then I realized just how long it was going
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Apologies in advance if this review is completely incoherent, because I kind of want to quote every single part that i loved, but then I would just be quoting back to you the entire fic.
I love, love how Miley is battling with herself -- on one hand just wanting to lose herself into Nick and on the other hand wanting to protect herself from heartbreak. I love how you write Nick -- so realistic, he acts so mature but then there's little bits of teenage boy that occasionally peek through.
Their teasing is absolutely perfect, the way Miley knows just how to antagonize Nick and how Nick can be kind of sly and sarcastic but still caring for Miley.
The scene on the jet ski was probably my favorite part -- just so well written, and so perfectly in character for both of them.
Seriously, what I just wrote does not do justice to how I feel about this. This fic is incredible and I really hope you continue!
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Next part should be up soon! For real this time. :)
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I love the way you write Miley being confused and wanting to be careful and mature and just not get hurt again, but also Nick just does things to her and she loves him so much. It's perfect. And the interaction between her and Nick is all so wonderful. The teasing and the banter and then the serious stuff. It all seems to realistic and it just draws me in.
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Seriously, just thank you!! I'm so happy you loved it.
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